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PostSubject: A {Noble} Wolf. A {Noble} Wolf. Icon_minitimeDecember 9th 2014, 18:09

Name: Noble

Gender: Male

Age: 5

Pack: Helidos

Rank Requested: Caretaker.

Appearance:
Noble is a very sturdy and and slim he-wolf with long legs and a long tail. His pelt is colored of the deepest ebony with white near his muzzle. He stands at 70 cm from paws to shoulder. He has ice blue eyes that are very piercing. He has scars running across his body but the noticeable ones are across his shoulders and face. A scar running across his face from his maw to his right eye. He has cuts on his legs, though his pelt covered most of them. He is very slim, he is not big though he is tall. He has muscles from training hidden under his pelt. His legs are very slender and yet sturdy, he is made for speed and agility. He has fluffy fur around his face, smooth and soft looking. He has a white-grey underbelly fur. He has white near his muzzle and some white, faded patches on his paws.

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History:
Noble was born deep to the south to the lead healers of the pack he was in. His father and mother were white wolves, so was his siblings. Noble was the oddball out, in fact he was son to the Alpha and Lead female Healer while the father of the other pups in his litter were the Lead Male Healer. But none spoke of these lies that were told to cover the tracks. Noble looked exactly like his demon like father, and this displeased his mother's mate and sharing lead rank. However, everyone knew that if they questioned the alpha then they would meet certain death. In their pack the only females that held high ranks were 'lead healer' and 'lead caretaker'. Out of the litter of 5, Noble was the youngest and all the rest were his older sisters. The alpha was the one to name the pups once their eyes and ears were opened and they could play and move around. Three litters were brought to the alpha when they could all see and hear. One litter was the rather large one, Noble and his sisters. The second litter was three pups and the last litter was only one.

The alpha took the females first, leaving Noble and the single pup to sit and watch as he brought them forth and gave them names. His sisters were first. His eldest sister, named Moon after her silver grey eyes. His second oldest sister was named Blood after the red berries all over her pelt. His third older sister was named Sunetta after the bright yellow eyes she had. and last but not least, his caring and gentle youngest but older then him sister was name Kinship. The next three she-pups were named and then the boys went ahead. The other male pup was named after the alpha's grandfather and then it was the pitch black he-pup's turn to be named. As he was pulled forward the alpha glared angrily towards him but slowly studied him and the anger disappeared into pleasure. He placed a paw over the pup and declared that his name would be Deatf (Dea-tef). He didn't like this name one bit and came to despise the name and alpha.

As Noble grew older he became the alpha's twin, well a look-a-like. Except the younger he-wolf was slim and athletic while the alpha was brute force and strength. Noble and his sister Kinship became quite close as they were the most caring and docile of the bunch. The other male from the litters grew to be a strong and buff brute but also was Noble's closest friend. The pups training began at the age of 6 months, which was fairly early and yet at the right time. They were forced to fight each others and go on long runs. Noble won a few fights against his sisters, but the proved to be stronger and more of the brute force then he was. Noble was more interested in the idea of helping others grow strong and wise, he was kind and very stubborn about the idea of fighting against one another was only for training and nothing more. His sister Kinship was interested in herbs and took after their mother in many ways except she was much kinder then the lead healer whom was plenty harsh to her subjects. During these days, Noble was called Deatf and barely ever responded to that name. His sister Kinship nicknamed him 'Noble Brother' for she thought of him as a very honorable and noble wolf.

The training him and the other pups went through was very tough and enduring. They came out of the fights with many scars upon their bodies. The scars faded with time, hiding beneath their pelts and in their memories. As they grew, his eldest sister became the apprentice to the Beta he-wolf whom took a fancy to her. His other sisters were apprentices to regular Warriors or Healers. He was made the apprentice of the Lead Caretaker. The other he-wolf that grew with Noble and his sisters was made the Alpha's apprentice. He learned to care for others with a stern role in life. (They are about one year old now) He felt deep down that pups should be taught wisdom and kindness but he obeyed the Lead and followed her orders. He was changed from Lead Caretaker's apprentice to the Alpha's apprentice as well as the other he-wolf whom trained with him. The alpha taught him to fight better, to use his speed and agility against his opponent. This is where he got the cuts upon his legs, from training with the alpha. To be more specific, he got them from wading into raging water and the sharp rocks cut his legs up pretty badly.

When their training finished, they were made to fight each others.(About the age of two) Or, the females were. His eldest sister beat each of the other females and was the first she-wolf granted the rank of 'Warrior'. The two males were made to fight older Warriors, while Noble's companion was able to defeat two Warriors (Within a period of time) He himself was chosen to fight the alpha. He came close to winning the battle but then he stumbled since he wasn't wise about fighting at such a young age and the Alpha left a mark across his muzzle with his teeth. He came from that fight with scars across his shoulders and one across his muzzle. He went to his mother and sister for healing. His body became weak as he and Kinship fell ill. Now Kinship had always been a weak wolf, one that needed caring. So becoming ill ended up being her death while Noble grew stronger and became better. He stayed with his sister until her very last breath, and she spoke these words unto him. "You are a noble wolf, dear brother, I love you." He then decided that he was going to change his name to 'Noble'.

As he aged to three years, his memories were slowly being placed aside. His training was over and he was placed as a 'Warrior'. He did his best to uphold his rank, but the beta came to fancy his oldest sister way too much to his liking. To his dismay and horror, the beta raped his sister and she became pregnant. He, in a rage, attacked the beta in revenge for his dear sisters. He and the beta came from the fight with many wounds and scars, but as the alpha was about to punish them, Noble gave the final blow to the beta. He killed him and the alpha, not wanting to kill his own son, banished him from the lands and sent him on his way to being a loner.

He left the pack and made his travels. He traveled north with the fact in his mind, he would never see his family again. This upset him but he was happy to be rid of the demon like place that held many scars and memories of sorrow. He didn't travel for long when he came across a young pup about the age of 6 months. He couldn't find the parents and the young one was badly injured. So he used the herbs he had learned of to help heal the poor thing and to care for him. The pup had no name and never spoke a word to the ebony he-wolf. So the he-wolf listed off names until the pup nodded his head. The name he chose for him was Callek. That was the name of a legendary warrior within his old pack. He healed the pup and fed him, taking care of him was his goal. When the pup was healed up, he asked him if he wanted to travel with him. The pup now named Callek nodded his head and seemingly agreed to travel with the loner named Noble.

When Noble turned 4 years old, Callek turned 1 and a half years old. They still traveled together and Callek still refused to say anything. Noble trained him in fighting and hunting so that Callek may survive even without the ebony brute whom called himself 'Caretaker Noble of the loners.' Of course it was an inside joke between him and the younger he-wolf, who seemed to enjoy his company much. They spent much time together and enjoyed it while it lasted, however, that joy was not going to last for long. Noble and Callek, two months after Noble turned four, went to climb a mountain but a large cat attacked them. Noble and Callek fought side by side, but it was no use and the puma badly injured Callek before finally leaving. Noble stayed by the silent wolf's side, sobbing since he could not cry. His blue eyes stayed on the poor young he-wolf. Of course Noble was injured himself, but he cared less about himself and more about the one he had been with for a year. His ears went forward and the silent young he-wolf named Callek finally spoke. "You were my best friend, Noble. I want to thank you for being there for me... even as silent as I was, you still cared and loved me. And for that, I love you too." This broke Noble's heart into splinters. After the battle, he spoke briefly to a young she-wolf around Callek's age. But he doesn't remember her name nor what exactly she looked like.  

Noble didn't become a bitter wolf but he did have a bitter side, he lived and survived. He made contact with other wolves, became friends even. But his heart was filled with pain, he had no family and in his 5th year of life he looks for a home that can accept him for who he is and was. He wants to be stronger and be able to protect young ones and family. Those are his wishes.


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Noble's paws carried him far from his old pack. By now he was plenty far north that he would never have to see another pack member or worry about then hunting him down. His ice blue eyes stared down at a nearby field. There were two doe's grazing in the grass. He moved from the rocks that he had taken shelter near, moving down and into the tall grass to hide his body. He crouched low to the ground and breathed slowly and calmly so he may feast that night. His tail tucked to the side, his ears against his head. He stalked forward, icy blue eyes searching the area and the doe. He stretched out and let his claws dig softly into the earth. His ears against his head, a rush that ran through his body as he got closer and closer. He pushed off the ground and sailed through the air. Claws dug into the doe's back and his teeth sank into it's neck. He jerked once, twice, three times and they crashed to the ground in a roll. He eyes danced with joy as he stepped away from the kill. It was clean and made his stomach growl with delight. He wagged his tail and leaned down, tearing into the flesh and pulling at the meat. Blood on his muzzle and paws as he satisfied his hunger. When he finished eating, he cleaned his paws and muzzle as well as he could. When he finished eating and cleaning himself from the blood, he got up and left. His paws going across the earth as fast as possible. He didn't like staying in one place for too long when he didn't know if he was safe. He raced across the lands, wind pressing against his pelt. He howled, and put more speed into his run as he moved away from his hunt. The sun beat upon his back and made him feel too hot with his ebony pelt. His bright blue eyes blinked often in order to keep from being damaged from the blazing star in the sky. He ducked under the shade of a tree, panting loudly and shaking his pelt so he could feel a bit more comfortable.


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PostSubject: Re: A {Noble} Wolf. A {Noble} Wolf. Icon_minitimeDecember 9th 2014, 19:33

Before you can be accepted Noble, you will have to change something:

- If his parents were white, then how is he black? Then you stated he looked like his father, so it's confusing.

Please fix this and an Admin shall look over your application.

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PostSubject: Re: A {Noble} Wolf. A {Noble} Wolf. Icon_minitimeDecember 9th 2014, 19:52

I should have it fixed =) There you go <3
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PostSubject: Re: A {Noble} Wolf. A {Noble} Wolf. Icon_minitimeDecember 9th 2014, 19:57

A {Noble} Wolf. R0it

Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

- Name Claim
- Ranks

Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!

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