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PostSubject: Malachai January 25th 2015, 18:53

Name: Malachai

Gender: Male

Age: 4

Pack: Erenyx

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance:
Malachai is a male Arctic Wolf that stands at 31 inches from paw to shoulder. He weighs approximately 78 lbs. His coat is all white with no signs of any black or grey hints. He keeps his coat fairly clean, but can get dirty easily. He has stunning cyan blue eyes that contain a piercing gaze that could swoon any female. They stand out from any other aspect of his body.

Malachai's personality is two-sided. He can be somewhat nice to those he loves, but if he is crossed, they should watch their back. Due to his past, Malachai knows the in's and out's of every method of persuasion, death, and dark things that he had experienced and learned in his past. He does keep his feelings close to heart, but does not reveal them. You're very lucky if you slither your way into his abyss of emotions. 


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Out of a litter of seven to a female Grey Wolf and male Arctic Wolf, Malachai was the youngest. He was pushed around by all the other young wolves in his pack. They shoved him, bit him, and cornered him so he couldn't run. When Malachai hit the age of one, he began training. Training to fight, hunt, and kill. He practiced his methods and techniques for hours on end. He slowly began to sink into a dark hole of evil and malevolent thoughts, dreams, and urges. He was insane.

By the age of two, Malachai had worked himself up the rank line and became the Lead Warrior for the Alpha Rico. He was the Alpha's wing man and slaughtered whoever he was commanded. One night, his older brother was caught having an affair with a female from the rival pack nearby. Rico found out their little secret and sent Malachai's brother to death.The howl of Rico signaled for Malachai to do as he was told. He kept down from the large rock that he stood upon, looking down at the one of the pups that had bullied him. He launched himself at the older wolf, tearing fur and flesh from every angle that he could manage to grasp. Twenty minutes later, with a blood-stained face, there stood Malachai over the mangled body of his brother. He had a dark grin on his face. Rico praised him for his work, then sent him to find the female and slaughter her as well.

Through the dark night, Malachai set out to where the female met his brother for midnight romance. He lurked in the darkness, watching the female as he sat and waited for her love to come, but he never would. She called his name a few times,"Nickola? Nickola, where are you?" The same deadly grin spread over Malachai's face before he spoke from the darkness. "Nickola, will never meet you here again, my love. You shall never see him again." The ghostly wolf sauntered out of the darkness into the moonlight that filled the area. The female looked at him with startled eyes. "Wha? What are you talking about?" Fear filled the words that fell from her mouth. The brute's eyes gleamed with excitement and bloodshed. He spoke a few words before he would act. "I have killed him. He was my brother. He defied his loyalty to our pack, so he perished at my paws and by the canines in my mouth." He flashed his teeth and before she could respond, he lunged himself at her. He gripped her throat and thrashed his head. She gasped for breath and yowled with the pain and sorrow of the news and her soon death. He had taken advantage of her small body before he had set in to kill her. Her body laid mangled and limp in the spot where the two dead lover would meet. He grinned and headed off.

He returned from slaughtering the female, his face soaked with her blood. He returned to Alpha Rico and informed him of the kill and the advantaged he had taken of you female before her death. Rico was pleased, more than ever. But the easy life would soon take a crashing downfall. Rico had found that his females had been sneaking off to the other males during the mating season rather than being impregnated by the alpha as they should. He was enraged and slaughtered every one of them. The other males kicked in and killed Rico, then ran off with any remaining pack members to take their lives elsewhere. Before he knew it, Malachai was alone. Dead bodies of the others surrounded him, already catching the scent of death and rotten evil. He immediately turned and took off to find another ruthless leader he could please through the dark of death and possession.


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Sitka enjoys the neutral lands. He always had. He liked meeting others from a different pack and learning their ways of life. Sometimes, it was a difficulty. He knew that many others could be very rude and malice in the acts of greetings. That thought always reminded him of what he heard of Alpha Azrael in cedar Grove. His reputation was harsh and unforgiving to those who would defy him and his rules. He didn't bother to hang around, or even meet Azrael before he left Cedar Grove. He really hadn't wanted to in the first place. he was glad that he now was under the rule of Quinn and Fenris as they seemed quite kind towards their pack and it's members. He smiled and looked up at the newly born autumn sky. Life is beautiful. He had never been so happy since his younger years with Zeke.

The male was simply enjoying the sunlight until a voice that shattered the silence and startled him arose. The ginger male quickly stood up and spun around. His yellowed canines were bared and ears flattened. He hadn't seen who exact had intended to scare him. Immediately, Sitka lunged and pinned whoever or whatever was behind him. He snarled as saliva dripped from his maw. He wasn't about to let anyone do such a thing and get away with it. He found it rude and quite an easy way to create enemies within other packs in the area.

He looked down at the other whom he had tackled to the floor. It was the Erenyx wolf he had seem sulking in the shadows of the trees that lay around them. Sitka growled at the brute who he had already took a dislike to. "Who the hell do you think you are?" He stared down at the slightly older male at his paws. He couldn't help but want to tear the masculine apart for his behavior. He didn't know how the older brute was going to react. He tingled at the though of a spar breaking out between the two strangers. The male huffed and watched the other for signs of movement or aggressive behaviors.


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PostSubject: Re: Malachai January 27th 2015, 20:33

Greetings Malachai, the only change that is needed is that a two year old wolf no matter the training wouldn't jump immediately to an Elite position. Perhaps a Lead Warrior and when he is a bit older a Delta, but not an Elite. Wolves receive there rank at this age after training as apprentices, no Alpha would choose an immature wolf as a high rank. Please adjust your post and myself or another staff member will reassess your profile

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PostSubject: Re: Malachai January 27th 2015, 20:37

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PostSubject: Re: Malachai January 27th 2015, 20:45



Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

- Name Claim
- Ranks

Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!


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