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PostSubject: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 18th 2015, 14:42

Name: Shia

Gender: Male

Age: 2 years old

Pack: Helidos

Rank Requested: Hunter

Appearance:
Shia stands at exactly 78 cm to the shoulder. His pelt holds many shades of brown. Light brown, dark browns scattered all through his fur. His shoulders are slim, his body narrow as he was built for speed and hunting. White speckles across his face, eyebrows quirky with what seems like age. His paws are speckled with grey, going up his leg and fading into brown as it goes. His tail is decently long, helping him keep his balance. He has scars all over his body from fighting, a scar across his left side of his face. His legs are slender but strong with muscles. Black covers his back like a cloak, white stretches across his underbelly. His body is full of muscles, strength raging in his bones.

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Shia was born to a Rogue of evil heart, no father to speak of. He grew to understand what being alone meant. His mother loathed him for having gotten his sister killed by taunting a puma. He looked exactly like his mother, so he turned to hate himself and his mother by the age of 6 months. His mother trained him in the most gruesome of ways. After he turned old enough, his mother let him roam the lands without her. He met a young fae about the same age of him, he loved her. She found him to be not good enough, so they sparred to the death. He killed her easily as she was much smaller then him. But she had howled, alerting her father to come running. It was his turn, he howled and called upon his mother. A spar to the death, a glint of evil within his eyes as his mother was killed. He ran. As fast as his large frame would carry him. He was lost, but found a pack's borders by nightfall. He was accepted by the Alpha and then lead to the Caretakers den.

The pack raised him with hate, raised him to be the demon he is. When he turned one, he started to grow fond of his training that he received. He was praised often for helping the adults hunt down prey. He grew stronger each day, aiming to kill the Alpha when he got old enough. But the Alpha had a son who was a bigger pain in the butt then Shia. They fought often, trying to be better then each others. Shia was the more favorite of the Alpha, but the Alphess hated him with a passion for taking all of her son's glory. They (referring to the two he-wolf's) were forced by the Alphess to fight each others one summer day, Shia won. He dragged the son's body away as a prize, taking his pelt and wearing it over his back to carry back to his den. He devoured the male's heart and flesh. As he walked back to the pack clearing, the Alpha was waiting and the Alphess howled in distress. She told the alpha that Shia had become jealous, striking out and killing their son for no reason. He wore the Alpha's son pelt, planning on placing it in his den. But he was attacked, the Alpha didn't have the heart to kill him and so instead banished him.

He spent his winter alone, hardly surviving. He caught small animals that were not enough to feed him fully. He was scared, but he still had the bad boy attitude. He didn't care if he was banished, that just gave him hope for somewhere else. He started his travels north, hoping to find a place he could rule over. A place where he would love a fae, a home that would make him last. He barely survived Winter, and as Spring came to an end... he discovered new lands to explore with a demonic view within his heart.


Joining Keys: Joining Keys are present and eaten by a hungry wolf ~ Mod Rose

How did you find Age? I'm Guardian Rose and this Shia, the wolf who dies in war.

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PostSubject: Re: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 18th 2015, 17:27

You need to fix some things:

- Wolves cannot eat one another in the womb.
- You history is confusing. Did the Alphess tell them to fight or did she end up fighting?

Adjust these things and your border post will be unlocked.

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PostSubject: Re: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 19th 2015, 08:52

I have fixed everything you asked of me~
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PostSubject: Re: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 20th 2015, 10:30

You did not fix it. I have colored the area which need to be fixed in red, so you can find it. Please change this and let me know.

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PostSubject: Re: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 20th 2015, 15:06

Sorry, meant to put "Alphess' Son" not "Alphess"... My mistake. It should be fixed now.
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PostSubject: Re: Lurking in the shadows, SHIA. July 20th 2015, 15:23



Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

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Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!

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