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PostSubject: Tatsu [Completed] November 1st 2015, 11:13

Name: Tatsu

Gender:   Female

Age: 4 Years Old

Pack:  Pyrvanthros

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance:
Tatsu measures in at 79cm at the shoulders and weighs in at 90 pounds. She is built ruggedly having hailed from the north. Her body is large and compact with thick muscles covered by an even thicker pelt. Her fur which on top of being thick, is double layered and mostly a dark almost black grey color. Her big boned skull is mostly this black grey coloration, which slips along the back of her head and down her neck encompassing her back and sides. The black grey fur is broken up however by lighter white grey guard hairs, that give her fur the similar appearance to a porcupine’s when she is riled up or angry. Tatsu’s eyes and muzzle are surrounded by a creamy tan coloration which runs down her throat. It is broken up by more of her black grey fur with its white grey tips. Down her limbs, belly and underside of her tail is the same creamy tan coloring. The fur on Tatsu’s head, neck and shoulder area is thicker than the rest of her pelt, giving her added protection from attack. Her pelt being the thinnest however on her belly and legs. Tatsu’s thickly furred ears are a brownish in color on the outside with a creamy white fluff on the insides insulating them from the cold. Tatsu has a relatively short tail for her size that is fluffy and thick. Lastly Tatsu, has pale yellow oculars which are almond shaped and outlined by black skin around her eyes.

Note: She has a torn right ear, a long half moon shaped scar that runs over the top of her muzzle. A collection of other smaller scars hidden under her fur on her legs and belly.


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Tatsu was born to a large northern valley pack. Close knit and powerful, the pack had a reputation for being unpredictable and dangerous. Her litter comprised of herself and two brute siblings, was that of the alpha and alphess. Her parents ran their pack with strict rules and structured training for all. They believed strongly in the unity of the pack and were not afraid to weed out those whos loyalty they felt was un true. Being the only female of her litter didn’t hinder Tatsu, she was determined and feisty from the time she left the den. Always pushing herself to out due her brothers and challenging them to spars. Hand picked by her parents, Tatsu was chosen to be raised and trained as a future Alphess for their pack. Tatu’s training never seemed to end. From the moment she could place a paw outside the den she was being taught in the ways of the pack. Their laws, their ways and how to fight. At two years of age Tatsu was commanded to banish a wolf from her pack. It was a test of her training and her abilities. Her parents watched carefully as she was shoved out into the clearing to face one of her brothers. The runt and omega of the pack. He’d been found fraternizing with outsiders and labeled a traitor. It broke Tatsu’s heart to attack her own kin, but she did it anyway. Believing it had to be done because that was what her parents wished. What they told her she must be able to do if she was going to become an Alphess. No wolf, not even one's own kin was above the law of the pack. So Tatsu battled her brother nearly killing him, receiving a tear in her ear and a scar over the top of her maw in the process. Her brother sent scampering from the pack bloodied and beaten. Her actions that day earned her the approval of her parents and their assurance she would one day become Alphess.

About five months after the fight, which left her brother nearly dead Tatsu was nearly finished with her training. Or at least the training she’d received from her parents. Tatsu’s mother was elderly and became ill. It was only a matter of time before she passed away leaving the opening for the Alphess position. But before she passed, Tatsu’s mother hand picked a brute from amongst the pack to become Tatsu’s mate. Tatsu fought this forced pairing for the longest time. But the brute eventually won her over and they mated in the winter before Tatsu’s third birthday. A month into her pregnancy Tatsu’s mother passed away. Tatsu like promised was made Alphess and her mate challenged her father for the position of Alpha, as dictated by their laws. But despite being an excellent fighter and great potential Alpha Tatsu’s mate lost the fight. Her father then proceeded to kill her mate. A betrayal Tatsu could not of seen coming nor could she tolerate. Destroyed by her mate’s death, Tatsu had no choice but to accept her father’s action or risk the death of her pups. So Tatsu stayed in the pack as acting Alphess alongside her father. But only long enough to give birth to her pups. She mothered a total of three healthy pups, but became distant from them, from her entire pack. Unable to come to terms with the death of her mate or her father’s betrayal, Tatsu left her pack when her pups were about six months of age. Feeling lost and filled with rage Tatsu ran as far from her pack as she could. Her heart however only felt worse as she traveled further and further from home. A hole left where her mate and pack had once been. Turning four years of age during her travels Tatsu wandered into Age.  Here she learned of the packs within the area. One of which caught her interest, Pyrvanthros.


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PostSubject: Re: Tatsu [Completed] November 1st 2015, 16:13

Greetings Tatsu, just one thing:

- Please do not use numbers in your history. You must actually spell them out. It's fine for height and weight in the description, but not the history.

Once you fix this, let us know and another Staff member will look it over.

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PostSubject: Re: Tatsu [Completed] November 1st 2015, 16:26

Apologies. All fixed^^
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PostSubject: Re: Tatsu [Completed] November 1st 2015, 16:37

One other thing is your grammar usage, particularly in your appearance section. Some sentences need punctuation and certain sentences start with conjunctions like "but" and "and". Fix up your writing a bit and a staff member will look at this again.

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PostSubject: Re: Tatsu [Completed] November 2nd 2015, 12:19

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PostSubject: Re: Tatsu [Completed] November 2nd 2015, 15:15



Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

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Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!

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