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PostSubject: Lizara (Completed) Lizara (Completed) Icon_minitimeJune 6th 2016, 10:48

Name: Lizara

Gender: Female

Age: 4 years

Breed: Grey

Height: 80cm

Pack: Erenyx

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance:
An assortment of colors and hues paint Lizara's small scar dappled pelt. Her head and face are dark, mixed in charcoal black and a deep chocolate that descends across her wide chest, her shoulders and down her front legs. The scruff of her neck, spine and middle are a deep ebony with a light splashing of light and dark brown on her stomach and tail. Her back tapers into much the same variation as her front, sheer black with a over tone of brown. One will notice that she is not lacking in stature and is not as delicately built as some she-wolves tend to be. Lizara is built for a mixture of speed and power, long yet muscular legs receding down into large paws that fit adequately with her overall build. Her coat is thick, its texture naturally silky to the touch and eyes splashed akin to amber. Her ears are somewhat on the smaller side, though fit well with her angular face. In all, Lizara is an overall well-rounded specimen, her frame not favoring speed nor brute force but fallen somewhere in between.

Personality:
Lizara is a clever and patient wolf, but even more so she is stubborn and difficult. She is a tactical thinker making her careful and always wanting to be precise about how she does things. She thinks of the possible outcomes before she acts on something. Lizara can come off as a bit distant at times but its simply due to the year she spent alone without a pack. On the other hand though, she can be quite aggressive, but for the most part she is just mainly stern sounding and a tad dismissive when spoken to. She isn't very talkative with most individuals, she doesn't talk at all to almost anyone. Lizara keeps to herself and isn't one that tries to make friends and well, she isn't very good at socializing in general. When not having to do anything for the pack she is usually off trying to be alone half of the time. She likes silence and is a quiet wolf herself most of the time.  When you can get her to talk she tends to have a lot to say if you are on her good side but she has a serious temper and is easily irritated by small things so getting on her good side and staying on it can be a tiresome task.

Lizara is not a fan of those that think they can walk all over her. She is always quick to try and put those types of individuals in their place. However she is not ignorant to authority. On another note, Lizara can and does have a sense of humor, although at times she can be a bit dry due to a hint of a sarcastic nature she has when she does talk. Besides her little bit of sarcasm and a serious temper she is honestly a rather caring wolf behind her mysterious and quiet exterior. And although liking to be alone a lot she does have her days and moods where she tends to like to stay very close to her pack and enjoy their company. She doesn't love often, or quick, but once she does love and care she does both very strong and very loyally.


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History: Lizara was the production of two alphas and their five followers. These being her father's parents, his two siblings and one of their mothers siblings. Being raised in turn by all members of their small developing pack, Lizara learned the meaning of what bonding truly meant and how it affected a packs teamwork. All the while Lizara also learned how proper rules and boundaries help to build closer relations amongst all a packs members.

She followed her father and her grand-sire almost everywhere once she was of age to tag along. She always had a seat right beside the males when it came to meals, and this meant she always got to eat before her litter-mates and the other pack-mates. It wasn't too much later at a few months of age that she learned what it was like to lose someone close. Both of her sisters, and her grand-sire passed during an encounter with a bear whilst Lizara and her brother managed to squirm their way behind their only defense; their family who fought until retreating was necessary. This loss hardened Lizara up as she lost three great companions and realized everything comes into your life, just as easy as it goes. Nothing is just palmed to you in return for nothing.

During Lizara's second and third year alive she found herself getting into multiple scraps with her brother. Numerous times both drew blood from each other, and numerous times their sire stood in to break them apart with wavering patience. Even with these outbreaks between them both, they did relax and provide short grooming sessions with each other and their remaining pack-mates. Lizara had always been favored by her father, being taught all there was to hopefully guiding a successful group; whilst her brother was favored by their mother, who preferred to spend most her time bonding. Thus, the growing pressure between the duo for who would take over after their parents would eventually hit its peak. After one specific fight Lizara's parents, and the rest of the small pack, beat into the dueling siblings. They planned on leaving more punctures than either had ever received and run both off in opposing directions with little warning or any invitation to return.

This was a turning point for Lizara; she grew within herself, learning once more that power didn't always get you what you wanted or needed. But she knew it was necessary to keep things organized and to allow proper bonding to take place through a proper pack hierarchy. As Lizara wandered for a rough while on her own, she had made tough decisions for survival; whether to go after certain prey or to leave it and wait for another. She attempted to scavenge from other packs and on two occasions almost didn't get out, but by unknown reasons; somehow managed her escape.

Lizara had spent her entire time alone working to set her priorities straight. She was going to find a place to call home; and in turn wolves to call family and if possible a mate to succeed her bloodline and build a stronger future for herself and those around her. Though her plan currently was to take up any rank and work her way to a higher rank.


Joining Keys: The joining keys were here... You know the rest.. - Alpha Teren

How did you find Age? I think this is the site I used to see my sister on all the time before she no longer had time for role playing. I've been searching for the site for a while and I'm pretty sure this is it.

Example Post:
(From another role play I'm involved in with a character of the same name)
Lizara trotted into the familiar area, inhaling the scents that were around her. They were all stale, some being of rouge wolves, which caused the female discomfort. She knew that she would need to get them out of the territory. Their smell would have no reason to be here, and even the faint scent could be misleading to some to think the wolves lived here. Making sure to keep herself strong when facing this, she looked back towards the wolves that had followed her, and nodded towards them. She looked to Xaeli and Feyre, noticing that the two she-wolves already had a slight bond, much like the one Lizara had formed with Feyre. She smiled at the thought, and then came to a stop once she reached her destination. This had been the place where her parents taught her to fight, and it would be the place that she would test the packs strengths, and weaknesses. She could already slightly tell what some of them were, just by their physique, and how they had spoken.

Sasha had been rather timid, and although confidence had floated with her words, it shattered afterwards when she had kept her eyes on the ground. Ashton seemed to be formal, which Lizara had noticed when he was speaking, but the male seemed laid back, too laid back. Ozmond... Well the male had gotten off to a rough start with Lizara. After the small outburst between Lizara and him, Lizara didn't quite find the male as her best company at that moment. She could already tell that the male was dominant after having been so long with the pack to himself. If he were to pose a threat to Lizara, then the alpha female herself would have to put him in his place. Amber eyes floating over the pup, and the members she currently mentioned, she knew that Signi and the wolf she had been tending too, would be in the commons. It would be no trouble if they were to appear here, but it would just be a surprise. Lizara had also noticed that one wolf had disappeared when they were talking in the commons, which bothered her slightly. Why would someone leave in the presence of their new Alpha? Did she do something wrong?

"Xaeli I want you to retrieve Zeya from the hunting grounds, are you up for the task?" She asked, looking to the Tibetan wolf with a small nod towards her. She knew that she could give her orders at least, since she would test her later. She waited patiently for everyone else to show up before she started barking orders to them too.


Site Season/Year: Summer of year five


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PostSubject: Re: Lizara (Completed) Lizara (Completed) Icon_minitimeJune 8th 2016, 12:35

Hello Lizara and welcome to Age Of The Wolves! There some things which need to be addressed before your application can be accepted:




- There are a few sentences that need to be corrected such as "All the while Lizara also learned how proper rules and boundaries guide build closer relations to all members." Please read through your history again and correct these since this is a literate site.



- The last part of your history (starting with "Thus, the growing pressure between the duo for who would take over as their parents entered their prime..." ) is confusing. Who is entering their prime? Who is the "they"  that wanted to leave more punctures? What happened in the fight and what was beaten into the dueling siblings? Please rewrite this to make it more clear.


When you are finished with these, please post below and a staff member will look at it. Thank you and welcome to Age!




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PostSubject: Re: Lizara (Completed) Lizara (Completed) Icon_minitimeJune 8th 2016, 12:46

Sorry about that, I proof read it on my phone and I probably just missed some stuff. I think It should meet the site's standards now. ^_^
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Lizara (Completed) R0it

Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

- Name Claim
- Ranks
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- Character List

Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!

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