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PostSubject: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 11th 2016, 09:25

Name: Julianne

Gender: Female

Age: 3 years

Breed: Grey wolf

Height: 80 cm

Pack: Erenyx

Rank Requested: Autay

Appearance:
Julianne has piercing blue eyes, a scar above her right eye due to a puma attack once she was out with the pups. Her fur is a sandy colored mixed with some red around her ears and dark markings around her eyes, chest, ears, legs and back. Her legs are build long and thin, her general body is build slim and tall which makes her pretty fast runner and also when fighting she can move quicker. She is 80 cm tall and she weighs 85 pounds. She has more muscles than you can see, due to her slim build. Her tail is not very fluffy, but rather straight and long it is almost black all the way. She has a rather long back that cannot be unless you are close to her. Her paws are rather big, leaving quite the prints when she walks, she can look rather slow clumsy because of her rather big paws and slim body, but she is actually rather fast and graceful.

Personality:
Julianne is a wolf who is not afraid of speaking what is on her mind even if it can get her into a lot of trouble. She is brave and caring; she will protect those that she have dear that include the wolves she has to protect by the law of the pack. She can seem very mean and sarcastic when she is talking, but that is just her way of being her. She does not back down from any challenge. She often keeps to herself, which may lead you to have the impression of her not being very social, but she can be social when she wants to. She is a deep thinker but also a fighter, she will stand up for what she believes in, even if it means getting hurt or hurting others. She is loyal mainly to herself but she can work with a pack, due to her life in a weak pack, she never let her loyalty overgrow her own plans.

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History:
Julianne is born to the beta female of a small pack; it was only an alpha, her mother the beta female, one elder, one omega and two hunters. She grew up as the only survivor of her and her four siblings due to very little prey and nurturing from her mother. Her mother had always hated her. Her father belonged to another pack where he had a mate who were expecting pups. She had been fighting a lot as a pup which made her mother even more angry at her, the pack were always alarmed when she walked around in the pack clearing. Some of the mothers were nervous when she became the autay of the pack, but her mother spoke with the alpha of the pack and she had this one chance of becoming an autay because of her good relationship with the pups, and her mother thought that it would be good for Julianne with some responsibility. After some time her father came to visit her, she had recently turned two years old. He came with the news of his mate giving birth to a bunch of pups. She had become an older sister, yet she did not have anything to do with them. After some time she became the autay of the pack. Mothers with their pups would look at her with those weird glances, not really feeling safe about letting her look after their pups. She vowed that she would prove them wrong. In addition, she sure did after an episode where she had taken the pups and one of the male omegas out to get to know their borders, when suddenly a young puma attacked, it didn’t look very old it had probably just left it’s mother for a few seconds and then caught the scent of the wolves. The male fled as quickly as he could while she was left with five small pups. She growled at the puma earning the attention. She lunged at it, biting and kicking even scratching all that she could. The puma hit her with one of the paws. Blood came into her sight, making everything red. She bit down one last time, killing the young puma. She forced the pups back to the pack and made them stay in her den while she visited the healer. She earned a scar that day. However, she survived; she then searched for the omega that had been with her that day. She found him lying next to a pond of water. She quickly killed him off. The blood taste in her mouth made her seem more relaxed than she had been for a long time.

She continued to be the autay, one of the pups named Toby were born almost blind. She once saved him from dying out in the blizzard. Not because she knew, it was the right thing to do; she knew he wanted to die. However, she had told him that a real wolf die fighting, not just letting the winter’s cold hand kill them. Therefore, one day she gathered all the wolves to the pack clearing, she killed the pup swift and merciless. This angered the pack they attacked her. She fought back... In the end, corpses were laying around her. Exhausted from the fight she fell unconscious. When she woke up her whole body ached from the fight, she got up she were dizzy. She tried to take a few steps but she collapsed soon, she growled in frustration. She crawled to the healers den and slept to the scent of the herbs that still laid fresh in the cave. After some days where she only moved to get some water or to eat some meat from the pile that they had gathered before she killed Toby, she looked over the little corpse of her friend. She looked around her, only seeing the corpses of her late pack members. After some time where she could walk around and run without her body hurting, she left her home without looking back. She remembered her father telling her that she had become an older sister to his mate’s pups. She might as well find them and see what they look like. Therefore, she traveled and once she found her father’s pack was dead. She walked around trying to find the corpse of her father. She soon found him... dead like the rest of the pack. However, there were on scent that caught her interest. She followed it and soon she came to a cave, there she saw a fae, only a bit younger that her trying to help her mother. She scoffed, there were no way back once the wolf lost his or her memory everybody knew that. She continued to keep an eye out for the fae, this was her sister... or half-sister would perhaps be a better word. She watched how her sister killed another wolf, she were clearly disgusted with it, this cause Julianne to sigh that was what separated her sister from Julianne. She followed her around making sure that her sister never noticed her. One day a pack accepted her sister, and Julianne finally learned that her sister’s name was Naya and that she was a healer and pathetic excuse of a wolf since she could not fight.

After having watched how her sister found another home, Julianne wondered if it was time she herself found a new pack. Of course, it should be a strong pack! However, were there such a pack?

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The snow were falling down in a slow almost lazy pace. Out of the snow, you could see a sandy colored wolf with some black markings. The she-wolf’s blue eyes were watching the landscape for any movement. “Hey Julianne!” the she-wolf turned around when she heard someone shout her name. One of the pups she were watching over, Toby were his name. He were almost blind and despite his own wishes he were kept alive, his parents who were alpha’s of the pack wished to have him around for as long as he could be. “Hello there Toby, what brings you here?” her silky voice flowed smooth from her mouth as she acknowledge the pups presence. “You know I like to be here when it snows, hopefully one day the snow will make my limbs go cold and I won’t be able to get back to the pack, and death will finally be given to me” he stated in a serious voice, he sounded a lot older than his actual age. Julianne made a tsk sound “I can arrange for death to come to you. If that is what you really wishes,” she stated sweetly, it was such a long time since she had killed a wolf, and she longed for it. The night she was born she should have been killed her mother and the healer said that, she had snarled as the very first thing, her mother and the healer said that she was born evil. She oblivious was not and she sometimes cursed her weak pack for it. She turned her attention back to Toby who looked at her eagerly “would you really do that?” he asked a bit unsure “of course, I never break a vow” she smiled.

They walked into the pack clearing and she howled to gather all the wolves, she wanted them to see this “Wolves! I have called for your presence here.” All the wolves gathered around them in a circle. She turned and looked at Toby, her eyes almost having a demonic gleam in them as she pressed the pup on the ground as bit down at his neck. She could her the gasp leave the gathered wolves, she let go of the dead pup and turned around to see them, the pups blood still on her lips. They all growled at her, snarling some of them walked towards her. She was ready for their attack “Come at me cowards!” she urged before she lunged herself at the nearest male. As they fought, it was clear to see the kicking and biting. In the end, she killed the wolf. Soon more fighting with a variety of other wolves, and in the end she stood alone with the corpses of her former pack spread around her. Still with the taste of blood from her former pack members, she left the lands that she once called home.


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PostSubject: Re: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 11th 2016, 10:27

Just a couple things to get you accepted:

- You need an avatar. If you need help with that, please let me know.
- Make sure you have spelled her name correctly. Sometimes you spell it with one N, others with two.
- Your image must be uploaded on some sort of online program. I would suggest uploading it on imgur or photobucket.
- Your appearance section is not long enough.
- Your history must be two paragraphs long.

Make these changes and we will get back to you, once you let us know!

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PostSubject: Re: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 12th 2016, 01:21

Now it should all have been fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 13th 2016, 17:21

Just a couple more things in regards to the history:

-You mention mothers being suspicious towards her after her being made Autay. If they weren't comfortable with her being around their pups then why was she made Autay? I'd encourage adding a bit more about how she got that rank.
- A large, adult puma would be near to impossible for a fae to kill especially with pups to look out for. She'd definitely need immediate medical attention afterwards if she managed to somehow win. Having it be a young puma she was against would make it more likely and realistic for the way she won.
- It is impossible for a single wolf to fight against a whole pack and win, especially since she was well enough to go 'traveling' right after.
- Lastly, there are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes towards the end of your history. Please fix these.

Once you've made these changes, post here and a staff member will look over it again!

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PostSubject: Re: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 16th 2016, 12:38

Now I think I have fixed everything ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Julianne's joining profile Julianne's joining profile  Icon_minitimeFebruary 16th 2016, 12:48

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Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

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Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!

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