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PostSubject: Lyric - Helidos - Completed February 15th 2016, 17:28

Name: Lyric

Gender: Female

Age: 3 years

Breed: Gray

Height: 81 cm

Pack: Helidos

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance:
Lyric is what most would say is a beautiful wolf. She's got a mix of browns, blacks, tans, and whites in her pelt, which all mash together into a gorgeous display. While her coat is striking, it's her eyes that make the difference between pretty and hideous. Bright blue with a tint of sea-green, her eyes are the most interesting part about her. They take in detail with ultimate precision, always flicking around almost anxiously. However, with a stunning outside comes scars that mar it. From her past, she received many scars. Most of them are on the back of her neck, but a few are on her sides and her shoulders. A few are teeth marks, others are by claw. These scars are what make her who she is. The scars themselves are difficult to see because her fur hides them, but if somebody were to look closely enough, they would certainly show. She hates her appearance because of the scars, even though she's really quite beautiful.

Personality:
Lyric is a very closed-off wolf. Having been tormented in her past, she swore that she would never allow somebody to hurt her ever again, and this involves not letting anybody in. Hardly anybody knows about her past, and she would be very unlikely to tell anybody about it either. A lot of people mistake her for being shy, or cold, but it's just that she's lost the capability to show real emotion anymore. It just seems that she wouldn't want to find real friends, and the possibility of finding a lover is low, however there is a slight chance. While it's not impossible for her to open up, she's just seen as sometimes naive because of her past, which she hates. She's overall very strong, but she masks it by her quiet nature. Her past is what drives her to be the way she is, and she doesn't really care about the future, so long as it doesn't repeat what she's been through. As long as you can survive and grow up in ranks, well, that's all that matters in her mind.


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History:

Her paws were a blur in the night, trying to escape the horror of what came behind her. The fire had completely ravaged her pack, leaving everyone to die except her, the Alphess, fleeing for her life. Her mate, dead. Her pups, dead. Her friends, dead. Everyone… dead. Little did the female wolf, Evergreen, know that she was about to run into even more trouble.

Kidnapped by a neighboring pack, Evergreen was taken to the Alpha himself, a brute named River who towered over her as she trembled at his feet. He gave her the rank of Omega, because of how weak she appeared, then proceeded to violate her. Once he finished, he left, commanding that she be watched all day, everyday, until the pups were born. When they finally were, he was both furious and pleased at the same time.

Two males and a female. The males, both black, were of good size, sure to take on the father’s massive figure once they had reached adulthood. But the female… she was pitiful, in River’s eyes. The runt; small, pathetic, always shivering in the cold. Though, her pelt was beautiful, a swirling mix of browns, blacks, and tans. Her eyes were startlingly beautiful as well. This was why the brute allowed her to live. River wanted to see how many males would try to take her, for he knew the brutes of the pack would take severe interest in her.

As she grew, she became River’s personal apprentice, while the two males went to the Beta and the Elite. Lyric was clumsy at first, in which River took the chance to beat her into submission and make her start again, even weaker than before with fresh wounds from his own claws and teeth. All the while, she never knew he was her father. Her mother remained alive, carrying the Beta’s pups now, which she also was unaware of. This left her confused. The daughter of a Omega, and she was the Alpha’s only apprentice? Many told her she was the first student of his in many years. He never brought his skills to the table to teach others.

By the time she hit a 8 months old, she was stronger than ever before, hardened by her teacher and father’s harsh ways. But now he had different plans for her. During training one day near the end of winter, he alerted her of her heritage. She was puzzled, and almost didn’t believe him, but everything fell into place. The training, the strange ‘affection’ that River showed her—or, at least as much affection as he was capable of. But as she was lost in her own thoughts, he charged into her side. She screamed, as his teeth closed over her scruff, holding her tightly. He snarled, then adjusted her position, and mounted her.

When he was finished with her, he vanished from the clearing where they trained. Once he returned, he found her still lying in the terrified, broken heap he had left her in the snow. He dropped a dead rabbit he had caught for her by her small body, then sat down before her. “You’re too young to carry my pups, but what a pleasure it was to take you, my dear Lyric. I promised that the Beta’s son could be your mate to my second hand himself. Enjoy it, my daughter, you’ll be the Beta soon enough!”

So for the few remaining of the winter months, that was her life. Being exchanged back and forth between multiple males, using her strictly for pleasure rather than lineage, because of her inability to carry pups at her age. During spring, she finally was able to escape the torture brought upon her. She went back to training, but never again with River. She taught herself in solitude far from the others of the pack. Growing stronger, she found that she didn't need anybody else. She became less and less social, and for a long time, talking was a foreign action to her. By the time the next winter rolled around, she was once again used. She eventually ended up getting pregnant with Jace's, the Beta's son and her soon-to-be-mate, pups. Kept in harsh conditions, she was inable to keep the pups alive, and resulted in stillborn offspring.

Spring came, and she regained her health. Now two years old, she was finally prepared to be on her own. So, she hatched a plan, stuck around the pack's camp to keep the suspicions low. When the night came, she decided to make her escape. Barely avoiding the patrols along the territory borders, and she could hear the angry howl of her father from a distance as she ran away from her old life. But never once did she stop.

For about a month, she lived as a loner. She never came across any other wolves, that was, until she found herself in the lands of Age. Four packs, so many choices... would she choose the correct one for her?


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PostSubject: Re: Lyric - Helidos - Completed February 29th 2016, 23:33

One small (sorta) detail that needs to be fixed.

In your history, it is stated that Lyric was used as a, for lack of better term, "sex-slave" to the pack for many months. Because of her inability to have children, as her body has not yet matured. The only problem, according to the rules of Age, is that this site is semi-realistic. Meaning, that our goal is to stay as close as possible to the real deal (minus a few details like talking, etc.).

With that view and rule, your history is inaccurate and doesn't go along with the lives of real wolves. Wolves only mate during the winter months, their sexual hormones do not kick in or are present at any other times of the year. They might find mates, yes, but there will be no actual mating. You get, me? I don't wish for you to have to change your history, but if you wish to keep her at two years old, she would have had to been raped and abused before she turned one year old, as of the time of the seasons. If you wish to have this torment reoccur again when she is nearing two, it can. But just in the winter months. If you want this torment to continue more, perhaps bump her up to three years? She'd be able to conceive then but might have an accident that resulted in a miscarriage?

I'm just giving out options to try and help you work this out. But overall, please change your history to fit the realistic basic needs. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Lyric - Helidos - Completed March 1st 2016, 17:38

Edited ^^ Sorry, completely spaced that
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PostSubject: Re: Lyric - Helidos - Completed March 3rd 2016, 19:25

Hi Lyric, just one quick change,

History: It's just an issue of timing. By your description, Lyric would not have been a year old yet when the Alpha mated with her, since it was winter. She would have been about eight or nine months old from what I can tell. Also, since she wasn't quite a year old yet, she wouldn't have been strong enough or skilled enough to survive on her own. I would suggest that she stay with the pack until sometime in the spring, then making her escape, to keep with the rules and our semi-realistic requirement (as Desoto has said).

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PostSubject: Re: Lyric - Helidos - Completed March 3rd 2016, 19:42

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